Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, what are the causes of this crucial problem? What is the solution?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have been changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels fresh water in large cities is one of the prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have been intrigued to analyze and explain fresh water resources in large cities. Regarding this, I would say it is happening mainly due to diminish of fresh water resource and can be showed by implementation the solution discussed in the essay.
To begin with, there are myriad merits of fresh water resource in large cities. The first and foremost point that it is true that there are diminish of water in large cities. Furthermore, many of people have waste water in there useless work and many of them forget to turn off tap. Also, water pollution is huge problem in that place where water sewage is not good. Moreover, hundreds of gallons wasted water in shower.
There are many solutions to tackle this problem. But there is most important solution that solves this problem. People should turn off tap while they used water from tap. Gallons do not wasted water in shower. Government should maintain the problem of sewage. They also store rainwater and do not waste unnecessary water.
Overall, we should store water in dam and do not waste water unnecessary in our useless work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diminished'.
Suggestion: diminished
...st point that it is true that there are diminish of water in large cities. Furthermore, ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reds of gallons wasted water in shower. There are many solutions to tackle this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, while, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8982300885 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44187260039 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2004828186 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1875 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278200206524 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105589320609 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672763441002 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167462861148 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616564268376 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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