Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, What is the cause of this crucial problem? What is the solution?
The importance of fresh water resource and cause which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stem s from the fact that people use lot of water and water sewerage is full and water not down in water sewerage and this water can increase water pollution diseases. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that many chemical factories increase water pollution and so many dangerous diseases. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these argument and which can certainly one is that the government can closed these chemical factories and the government worker clean the water sewerage. Besides, the people not waste the water and save the water. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of fresh water resource and cause are instrument indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...er, there are some pitfalls that negate these argument and which can certainly one is that the...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18779342723 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56952092576 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3625628542 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180719396902 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714157410282 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539590008414 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115040420301 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248536926978 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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