A healthy diet is more effective for keeping fit than exercise. What is your opinion?
Being fit thesedays have become a serious challenge for everbody. Some people believe that eating nutritional diet have better results than doing exercise on health. This essay will discuss that how this notion is incorrect.
To begin with, doing regular exercise stretches different muscles of the body whereas controlled diet can only limit intake of fats which cannot burn the fats already developed in the body. For instance, doing sit ups on daily basis will help burn fats of the stomach which is not possible with diet only. Therefore, exercise is more productive than diet to be in shape.
Secondly, healthy diets can be expensive which is not affordable to everyone. On the other hand, exercise does not require much money and is in the range of poor people also. For example, people who cannot afford to go to gym can do basic exercises such as push ups, sit ups, walking and running in a public park which have enough area for these exercises. Hence, exercise is practical for all human beings in order to stay healthy.
In conclusion, exercise lets all muscles to be stretched and also it is affordable even for lower class which might not be the case with good diet only. In my opinion, exercise on regular basis is more effective than a healthy diet for a human to remain fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...oney and is in the range of poor people also. For example, people who cannot afford ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34844208933 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.215223655 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5833333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.25397266985 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320910315431 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135030679861 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134819278349 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21003824457 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974509684331 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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