How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? what problems it cause.
These days people are spending too more time in office due to strict project deadlines and less time at home. The substantial increase in working hours has raised a concerned about the impact of personal life. This essay will elaborate the reason for this problem and will lead to conclusion.
Today, in modern competitive world people are setting goals in their life to achieve greater heights, so they try to work more on daily basis. In addition to this, companies are also putting pressure on employees to complete their work by working over the weekends so that client demands can be fulfill. The pressure from company and heavy load of work increases the gap between personal and professional life. For instance, there are companies who demand their employees to work for 10-12 hours daily and also recommend to work over the weekends.
Another key justification for this notation is that working for long hours will result in health problems like backache and diabetes. In addition to this, some people are under depression as they are not able to handle professional and personal life properly. This could also result in divorce or separation.
In conclusion, people should give equal wattage to personal or profession life so that work life balance can be maintained. Moreover, work life balance can help people to improve health conditions as they spend some time for himself or herself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06465517241 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53336460791 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.369951827 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246782805293 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945407149278 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048829770857 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160126881885 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493424468074 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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