How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
In these days it has become a growing trend in people spending most of their time at workplace than their family. While it is important to have office commitments, but it is also important to make some time for ourselves and also to our loved ones. This essay will discuss, why we need to have personal time and what problems it can create if we do not make some time for us.
To begin with, there is a myriad of reasons in favor of my stance, the most preponderant one is spending extensive hours at work lace will lead to conflicts in the family. For example, if you are a married person with kids, how will you make time for your family if you work in the office until night, by the time you reach your home, kids will be sleeping, which will break the bonding between you and your kinds. Hence, making some personal time not only make you happy but also helps in creating a strong family connection.
In addition to the above, it is not something that we should not spend time for work, but we need to make a choice based on a day-to-day situation to make a perfect balance. For instance, according to a recent research by Stanford University, a person who plans and allocate time for work and family effectively, will lead a happy life. Therefore, it is apparent that balance should be maintained in time.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that sending time for us is of paramount importance. Lastly, each one of us should balance the time for personal and work to lead a happy life.
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45357142857 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39923191366 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7087437609 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316454714798 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125361276278 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650128626139 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194550994631 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525615438703 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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