It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most debatable topics of today’s contemporary society is importance of education. Although, some expertise believe committing to taking someone’s responsibility as a life partner is a negative step, whereas taking a job before gaining education qualifications is a positive option. This essay will discuss, having a partner adds responsibility and getting a job disciplines us in balancing various aspects of our life.
Firstly, marriage is a life long commitment. Marriage demands emotional involvement, physical and mental satisfaction, and pressure of extended families. An individual attention could be easily diverted and they can lose focus which can ultimately hinder their ability to progress in their professional or educational quest. Hence, it can be said marriage burdens an individual with uncalled accountability.
Secondly, education with work has been noted as best practices for student according to various case studies done by researchers. Students not only gain practical skills but also theoretical knowledge. In this way, they have more understanding of their strengths and weaknesses, management of time, finances, career interests. Therefore, we ca say job before education can be fruitful.
To conclude, this essay discussed why marriage can distract a person from becoming successful and why working before school can help an individual make informed decisions. In my opinion, I am in support of getting a job before finishing school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'can'?
Suggestion: can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74660633484 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30300625653 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696832579186 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6346748612 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116047976315 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045727662669 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851494941245 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757911852607 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694112184046 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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