It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
there have been some controversy about the idea of people getting married before completing school or secure an employment because it may bring negative consequences for their future lives. This essay will explain why early marriage can seriously affect individuals' in short and long term.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why marriage at early age could bring detrimental consequences on people's lives because they are inmature and without life experience and a professional skill to promise a brilliant future for their families. For instance the future of a young married man could be to seek employment in a factory or fast food to cover his family's expenses, which could be devastated because he may not be able to pursue his dreams as he has other important commitments to meet.
Another key point of marrying at young age is to forescat a separation or divorce because many young people realised latter in life that they make a mistake and they are not emotionally prepared to have not only a family but also a responsibility to be the main provider for them. Studies have demonstrated that early commitment without preparation and life experience is very likely to fail. Therefore, it is vital that young people access education before planning to engage in a serious commitment.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that getting married at early age, without a career and life experience is very hard to maintain, because conflicts will arise all the time and will end up in a divorce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00390625 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75308054997 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8494734911 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.125 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821558111547 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387164444529 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484482021959 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614340614474 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412356658622 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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