It is often argued that travelling overseas is overrated, and that there are many scholars who study locally. Is travel really necessary to attain a higher education?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that studying overseas is always a debatable issue of every society. Some people opine that according to history, there are many brilliant scholars who study locally. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe and this is not always true to get higher education from abroad is the only way to make a person scholar. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this essay before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact travelling is the only way to seek education at higher level from abroad. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that travelling used to be necessary for people of past era due to limited resources and non availability of other basic facilities of schools and colleges. As a prime example, great legends of history, which include the famous poet Shakes Pear, the great physicists Einstien and many other names who seeked education from abroad and traveled for this reason.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that in this contemporary world, higher education is available on local scale and there is just a need of sharp and intellectual mind to grasp maximum of knowledge even with local study. Hence, travelling is the mandatory option for higher education for smart and capable people.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that brilliant scholars only require suitable and satisfactory medium for studies and travelling is not their basic requirement to seek education.
Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24817518248 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71086085648 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1229666602 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254778579956 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928083521489 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630569504369 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114285264816 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613331759041 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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