It is unwise to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that entering a married life is an unpractical decision especially before finishing college and having a stable job. I strongly support the foregoing argument due to reasons such as being financially uncappable and having not reached the matured age.
To begin with, people at the age of 20 and below are usually at the stage of accomplishing student life. With regard to this, getting married to someone they loved most even if they think it is the right time cannot be supported by the fact that they are not financially ready. They do not have any means to earn a living on their own besides being economically dependent on the their family. For instance, university students in Ontario are constantly receiving allowances from their guardians until graduation and able to find a decent job.
In addition, young generations should be mentally and emotionally ready before entering to the next stage of adult life. Seeing that maturation can be attained at the right age and time, they must first be prepared to handle larger responsibility and equipped themselves to manage any household predicaments that may come along the way. To cite an example, according to recent article published in Times that 65% of married couples in the World are filing a divorce due to mental incapacity.
To recapitulate, the blessed matrimony should all be based upon the financial, mental and spiritual preparedness of a person. Certainly, these factors will work out for both partners through time and can make the relationship stronger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...besides being economically dependent on the their family. For instance, university studen...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... come along the way. To cite an example, according to recent article published in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82601742234 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0126607044 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078386155311 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280804323862 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335671951516 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435893831289 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301875666492 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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