Large shopping mall
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that large shopping malls are very beneficial for today's modern society. there is a widespread worry that it would only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opiion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of argument in favor of my stance. The most preponderent one is that thanks to advance shopping arcades, people save their time as they have variety of stores for one to bbuy all their daily needs under one roof. Not only can it can offer all the provision and item at wholesale rates, but it can also contain products directly imported from companies. Needless to say, all these benefits stand public in good stead, when it comes to helping them to have good quality of things.
Another pivotal aspects of this argument is that owing to this, individual can take basic facilities with security such as parting. Furthermore, not only can big stores enhance their shopping experience as they offer several type of entertainment sources along with shopping like cinema, but it can also give number of jobs to local residents. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of these big markets.
To conclude, it is crystal clear that the benefits of shopping malls that are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81115879828 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52926287633 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2926970036 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.909090909 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199560508735 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622362095307 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977790489818 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139055304592 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842726878178 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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