Large shopping malls are replacing small shops
The importance of large shopping malls are replacing small shops which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential Impact in recent years. In my opinion, the proposition appears to be more rational. This easy will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that mostly people focus of large malls but no discount in which large shopping malls .Consequently, large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that small shops very beneficial for all people because small shops discount for all purchases. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that large shopping malls is very costly. Beside, 50% individuals focus of large shopping malls and 50% individuals focus of small shops because rich people choose wears branded dress so purchase of small shops. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of large shopping malls are small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10931174089 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58580558676 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518218623482 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1511370895 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542318587051 0.242375264174 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199935817703 0.0925447433944 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192573102318 0.071462118173 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37913082397 0.151781067708 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982461417098 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.