Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think
this is a good or bad change?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in people thought that large shopping malls are replacing small shops and some says it is good for society while others say it is bad. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that large shopping malls are good for local people because they can easily purchase things in one place and malls cannot only contribute to shopping, but also numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help a nation thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when one follow such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of large shopping malls that these are not affecting small shops.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of large shopping malls in cities are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91078066914 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69064355645 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4679386836 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213499728015 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803030045411 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083607231393 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134346868441 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649371502058 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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