In less developed
countries, are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages?
In recent times, due to reduced fare to travel across the globe, many people are increasingly showing interest in exploring various places. Although tourism provides a lot many benefits, it has its own challenges to face. Although it is a matter of discussion, I tend to believe that the advantages of tourism are great when compared to the disadvantages.
Firstly, there are myriad of reasons in favor of my notion. But the conspicuous one is that tourism improves the employment rate by providing many opportunities to local people. For instance, a recent survey in Cambodia revealed that there is two percent of economic growth through tourism is observed amongst various sectors. Apparently, countries maintain more greenery so as to attract more tourists which is good for the environment.
However, there are challenges caused because of tourism. A few people locally might get influenced by tourists and there is a chance of threat to their tradition. Moreover, people might get attracted to a few items such as a camera from tourists. For example, many tourists reported in India that their valuable items were lost. Hence it is evident that there are a few disadvantages due to tourism.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of tourism are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.133640553 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82552747517 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3257565972 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6923076923 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192254869066 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064910779007 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680870887466 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105454734798 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299655536393 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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