In less developed countries, are the disadvantages of tourism as great as the advantages?
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that the effects of tourism are one of the biggest issues which less developed countries are facing. While some people believe that these effects are advantages, others would argue that there still have some disadvantaged parts. As far as I am concerned, the impacts of tourism are both advantage and disadvantage, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
it is evidently reasonable for me to believe that there has the advantaged influence from tourism in less developed countries, which is obvious because the booming tourism industry will bring many tourists thus boost the local economy. To further support the above statement, India started to develop its local tourism in 2000, which has dramatically increased the gross domestic product over the decades.
On the other hand, it also has some disadvantaged effects. The main justification for this view is that tourism will bring environmental issues. In particular, those less developed countries usually do not have sufficient waste disposal systems and lack fund to deal with a large amount of waste brought about by the tourists. Besides, some tourists may break the ecological balance and cause permanent damage to the environment. this can be established by a recent study by Oxford University which stated that 76% of the viewpoint had been polluted because of too many tourists.
In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract public attention, we may safely reach the conclusion that there are both advantages and disadvantages of tourism in less developed countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, still, thus, while, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46850393701 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91336720573 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5091432685 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354037341874 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12032264002 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106766342638 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2329646528 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889053455891 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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