The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that there are lots of problems which governments and organisations are facing. Some people believe that air pollution is the most important issue of these, others advocate the populations' growth should solve immediately. As far as I concern, global warming is more critical in respect of these issues.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that air pollution has more harmful. The primary reason is that air pollution has worsened global warming, thus causing more drastic climate changes. Furthermore, this issue also reduces biodiversity; therefore, it will result in species extinct. Finally, these will endanger our lives and the earth would not be suitable for us to live.
On the basis of the above reasoning, the solutions to this problem should also be many. First of all, there are the obligation and responsibility of the government to take some action. For instance, the government should develop public transportation. It could cut the burning of fossil fuels. In addition, it is necessary for the international community to curb the fuel consumption of the big energy consumed countries.
In a nutshell, I think that the above-mentioned problem can solve one day in the future. Additionally, I would suggest that it seems highly wise and vital for us to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...ant issue of these, others advocate the populations growth should solve immediately. As far...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28837209302 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10016660694 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5631215194 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2142857143 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198117455275 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605848734046 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475188988266 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108425626358 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240341643301 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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