The medical technology is responsible for increasing the average life expectancy. Do you think it is a curse or a blessing
Once a friend of mine said, "Doctors are snoozing buttons, they just delay death." Said this I was in a dillema, is it a curse or blessing? Let's delve into below essay to get a better understanding.
Chemotherapy is the cure that has been discovered by scientists as the best way to fight Cancer. Families are fighting miserably with patience, they need to face a lot of pain, rage, economic loss and mental tourture. Just for on good cause, that we can see again our beloved once. We put all our energy and strength to save them. But when we visit any hospital, we always have the insecure feeling of sadness and anguish. The atmosphere is scary itself. Did ever we think why is that? It is because whatever may these medical facilititation and amenities provide, at the end life surrenders.
As per a Journal in The Hindu, Neurologist said that death is a state of mind, people die at very early age, cause of brain dead, just with the thought of dimnishing someday. Doctors nowadays give laughter treatments to their patients whom they know have feeble chance of life. Scientist even agree to the fact that human organs by the virtue of its nature will dilapidate within time period. After all, why this much of pandemonium toward saving life? Why not focus on the quality of life. Medicine will extend some time, but how you live the entire journey matters at the end.
Having discussed these vital information and believes, I would advocate the fact that, yet medical is a boon to the society but death is irrefutable hence cannot be deceived. Therefore, live your life with affulent joy, not with the concern of death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74825174825 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57972776748 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5290452201 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4444444444 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109720167616 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300817590219 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298856718106 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573574001795 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00537015999169 0.0609392437508 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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