Recently, the phenomenon of using more online information ant its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that online data cannot be highly influential than library books, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that using online information can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree using the online sources. At first, the disadvantage of available information on the Internet is the accuracy of their sources. However, the online information are free to download and they need lower space to save. For example, there are many Internet sites that represent the rare books in a pdf file and free for download.
In addition, the negative with physical library books is the difficulty of providing appropriate space to keep the books. But, digital books need very little space to store. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of libraries are using the digital information to solve the issue of providing the enough space.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of online information far outweighed its drawbacks.
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but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35185185185 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96688108995 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9863961439 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289182505566 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100718555922 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418881364107 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150757911605 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273562512712 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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