Over a few decades, the evolution of technology has changed the lifestyle of people whereas in other side people life have become complicated. Because of the evolution of the latest technology from a house cleaner to cuisine machine, it has totally diverted people live in a different path. In this essay, I’ll discuss the both argument i.e. weather technology has made people life comfortable or improve quality of life than I will conclude my opinion with a reason.
Firstly, an I’ve mentioned above the technology has made people life easier and comfortable at the same time people have become slaves of technology. People are using it wrongly; technology is made to save time so they could do more work or can gain more output in a short time but instead of doing that people are engaged in technology.
In other hands, using any technology depends on the user how they use and for what purpose they are using. It is necessary for people to know that the use of technology and learning how to use it. For example, a computer can be used in a different way, if the computer is used for office work or study purpose than it is a positive use of technology but it is used for playing a game in an office than it can’t give your output. Here, people, most of the time is being spent on the technology rather than working. Now, people are blaming the technology that they have very less leisure time.
In conclusion, I reckon that technology can save our time and can also make our life like vain. Thus, it depends upon the user how they use it.
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Suggestion: whereas
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, as to, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43763030882 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4254124646 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140720146179 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664092980292 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426977819157 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092872346939 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469667731225 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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