'Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. ' Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your
own experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about many young people leave home at an early age to either study
or work in another city. While it is possible to claim that young people become more independent persons, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing the both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why young people do not leave home at an early age. One of them is that young people recognize bad friends and make bad things where there is not parent control. It can also be argue that the family rules are important to control young people in their homes and to be more sensible. It should also be taken into account that without follow up them, they waste their time in trying a lot of wrong experiments as they have not any experience.
Those who argue for young people should leave home at an early age have a different view and say it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that they will gain a lot of useful experience. Then, there are concerns about they will have ability to take many decisions related to their future easily and confidently.
While, there are strong argument on both sides of the case, my point of view is that I support young people to leave their home at an early age.I would strongly recommend that parent should follow up them after leaving home without any dominate and give them advises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ple to leave their home at an early age.I would strongly recommend that parent sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57088122605 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23450167912 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6915807964 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.454545455 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397883888187 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162870453598 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134379811559 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240341503542 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061944337199 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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