Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become an eesential part of our lives, what
is your opinion?
Over the past few years, more and more mass media is becoming part of our lives. Some people think that we can not live without it anymore, while others argue that relying on these means of communication might be harmful. The following paragraphs will analyze some advantages of this fact. I am inclined to believe that pros are way more significant than cons.
There are several reasons why television and newspapers have become a key point in our routines. One of them is the possibility of knowing where the traffic jams are, which are one of the most frequent problems in urban cities. it can also be taken into account the benefit of finding a good job or a sales promotion.
Despite the above, there are several explanations why it can be harmful. Firstly, who stays the whole day at home watching TV tends to face serious problems with sedentary or obesity. Secondly, children can easily find adult channels without a good supervision.
In conclusion, the foreign discussion propounds that some means of communications are already an essential part of our lives. However, we need to use them moderately. Furthermore, it is expected that people take cognizance of that to avoid facing some issues like obesity. Nonetheless the mass media remains an essential part of our lives by keeping us informed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this means' or 'these means'?
Suggestion: this means; these means
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
... avoid facing some issues like obesity. Nonetheless the mass media remains an essential par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95475113122 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72229770096 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6534831357 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190047247866 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587128630833 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900565337815 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100029974065 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578427167059 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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