Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
it is irrefutable to say that, having time for ourselves makes us a better person. spending time on personal life would have a heart impact on every individual. I am inclined to believe that if we have more time for ourselves we can conquer every situation we have. The following paragraphs will analyze inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to logical conclusions.
Firstly, globalization has greatly affected every human in a society that leads to the overworking of the employees. For instance, due to short notice deadline and high commission, people tend to spend more time at work. As a result, people went home late from work and would have no time for family and for themselves.
Secondly, due to high expenses and many responsibilities, people tend to work overtime to have higher pay. Salary as well is one of the factors that people tend to overwork. For example, a breadwinner of the family has no time for leisure and personal life as money is badly needed. Furthermore, the time they spent for themselves was overtaken by their work as well as their rest day. they would rather spend their day off in part-time jobs than to rest or go shopping.
To recapitulate, people tend to lose their time for themselves as they all pour it to work. The greater the responsibility the greater the time they will spend to work. thus, spending time for personal life is their least thing to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78189300412 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75443015304 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534979423868 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3703900044 50.4703680194 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4666666667 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502744547219 0.242375264174 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185412434777 0.0925447433944 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102969371739 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338008840593 0.151781067708 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752134888934 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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