Nowadays people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life Discuss

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Message: Use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
... notion. The substantial influences has trend sparked controversy potential impact ov...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...some different purposes. For instances, much people hectic their lifestyle, they hav...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...problems and their children suggestion. which is bad effect for their children upcomi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
... children upcoming time. Needless to say,all these demerit stand in a bad stead. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this demerit' or 'these demerits'?
Suggestion: this demerit; these demerits
...dren upcoming time. Needless to say,all these demerit stand in a bad stead. Elaborating my...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bad stead. Elaborating my view points , there are some pitfalls and play crucia...
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Suggestion: many
...falls and play crucial role their life, much people hectic their lifestyle. they are...
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Suggestion: They
...fe, much people hectic their lifestyle. they are not spend time their friends and fa...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...le hectic their lifestyle. they are not spend time their friends and families members...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...t their life, so people should they are spend much time their personal life and their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32669322709 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44156641025 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7687428834 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460175924886 0.242375264174 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160899366341 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16367259298 0.071462118173 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297727607089 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387788921938 0.0609392437508 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.