Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life, and a bridge to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yeild a consensual dialogue, a constructive agreement on the importance of tv can lead to thought-provocing discussions. my view is that irrespective to the numerous arguments that exist on either side, tv plays a pivotal role in the modern era.
The are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To commence with Television plays a crucial role in spreading awareness and knowledge, and there is a lot of educational programs and documentary films which are benefit to aspirants and student. it is important to note that althogh watchind tv is beneficial, limiting the watch hours is very important. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that tv is important.
Another pivotal aspect on the argument is that tv watching hours must be controlled by parents. The best example here which illustrates my view is that a survey which carried by an eminent professor at the University of Queensland who exemplified that 70 percent of the students have a big problems from watching tv, and they must spend up to two hours a day.
I see that there is equally potential evidence on the argument i have provided and my view is that tv has opvious advatages, but it must be under parent's care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98104265403 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09047622995 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3438587745 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790953394371 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326296692041 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145238121042 0.071462118173 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462032103758 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161651561489 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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