Nowadays, TV has become an essential part of our life. Medium to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this ?
Nowadays, there is a significant influence of television in our lives, which has created many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people agree that it is a medium of latest news, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that it is more like a friend in need to them. In my opinion, television has a major role in our daily lives in every aspect. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various ways television plays a dominant role in our routine life. The most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it keeps the public well updated on the news happening in the world. As an illustration, most people have an interest in knowing about the national and international news and events. Moreover, television helps people to take decisions beforehand by knowing traffic jam updates and weather reports. Hence, it shows that watching television helps people to keep themselves abreast of latest information.
In contrast, there is another view which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of television as a companion. The most conspicuous one roots from the fact that television has become a medium to kill boredom. In addition, people from different age group enjoy watching television according to their choices and interests. For instance, elderly people enjoy their retired life by watching soap operas and various sitcoms. Thus, it shows that television has become a daily support for them.
In the light of above discussion, one can conclude that the impact of television is significant in every person’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnificant in every person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11235955056 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81282634239 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5309596215 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161246215422 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053167701487 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389179255627 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901566009086 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418976270697 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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