The number of cars on road are largely responsible for the increment in pollution. Do you think government should restrict one household to one car.
In the recent years, pollution has been one of the most alarming concerns. The researchers apprise that its consequences can be calamitous if the appropriate measures are not undertaken. In my opinion, due to the large number of cars on the road which harmfully damages the environment, government should take right action to remedy the issue.
The primary cause of environmental issue are the greenhouse gases emitted by humans, most of which are the results of combustion of fossil fuels in cars, factories and electricity production. Other contributing factors are the methane released from agriculture and the gases used for refrigeration. Deforestation has also resulted in the increase in the levels of carbon dioxide and cars use by each individual household are also largely responsible for the increment of polluted environment.
To address this rapidly growing issue, the use of efficient modes of transport that utilise low carbon fuel must be promoted, while at the same time the efforts must be directed towards restricting the number of vehicles on the road. Furthermore, the extensive use of renewable sources such as solar, wind, bioenergy is another beneficial method to resolve the issue. Thus, we as individuals should make persistent efforts to efficiently consume energy resources, especially at home.
This dissertation has enumerated the seriousness of the problem and least actions taken by authorities to solve it. Therefore, if the governments fail to reduce the sources that lead to the problem and we as individuals do to take ull responsibility for the environment around us. It might then worsen the issue to an irreversible extent.
- Opinion on whether work-life balance can be achieved, and the reason of why some people can't achieve the desired balance. 85
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- Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? 80
- Give examples from your experience. In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion? 88
- Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...duals do to take ull responsibility for the environment around us. It might then worsen the issue to an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35741444867 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10184138864 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4525586351 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224765709736 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616388375541 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075090636936 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115735280841 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569868284794 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.