Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts, to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to say that, violence by juveniles has increased in recent years at an alarming rate in our society. Children are involving themselves in crime and making our society jeopardize. Considering this, some people opine that parents should be responsible for their young one’s fault, while others argue parents should not be punished. This essay will give assertion on both sides of the contention before delivering plausible conclusion.
On one hand, parents should not be blamed for their children’s fault as the decision to commit the crime is entirely made by the children. There are many parents who have done their best part in the upbringing of their children so that their child cannot commit any offence, yet, their offspring still succeed in committing the same. Moreover, mass media is playing crucial role in making adolescents aggressive. For example, currently, there are many violent games and movies that are being released in the market. This makes a child’s more violent which could be one of the reasons for committing the crime.
On the other hand, parents should be held accountable for their children’s crimes because parents are the first people that a child gets to know after he or she is born. It is believed that parents start shaping the child’s moral compass and character from a very young age. In addition, most of the children do offense because they were violently abused by their parents when they were young.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, parents should not be solely blamed and punished for their children’s actions. Other factors should be taken into account when deciding on whom to blame. The government must take some prudent steps to educate children in their schools, so that they do not commit crime.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14965986395 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71711444505 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8161039874 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368574204761 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127825692002 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106152736361 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244725566648 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250806139085 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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