Parents should be held responsible for their children's act. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a number of juveniles indulging themselves in different crimes and unethical activities thus, jeopardising society at an alarming rate. So, it is widely debated at global level with some people reckon parents should legally responsible for their children while others oppose it and stand on different side with the different views. In my opinion, the former proposition the letter.
There are a plethora of arguments in favour of my stance, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that offsprings spend most of the time with their parents in their early age. Not only do children imitate their parent's activities by watching them, but they also learn basic moral and ethical values from them. Parents are the only one who can hold their behaviour in their younger age. Needless to say, all these merits of parents being responsible for their children's doings.
Another overt facet is that undoubtedly, parents do each and everything that they can for better upbringing of their children. Sometimes, however, their over love and affection misguide their offsprings, and they go astray from their path. Hence, it is evident why many are in favour of this notion.
In view of the arguments above, one can conclude that it can not be denied that many factors influence children's behaviour, albeit the role of parents is a pivotal one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57307008361 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9301904328 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296284286301 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115732197304 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850058505584 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166517952911 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567482157301 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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