In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The past decade has gigantic inventions in the area of medicine, transportation and information technologies. We have witnessed astonishing discoveries in the fields of antibiotics, the airplanes and the computers, amount all the innovations and inventions. I believe, the invention of computers is the game changing and almost touched everyone in the civilization.
To begin with, there are plethora advantages of computerization. First, it impacted both societies and economic activities. We can imagine hardly without computers. Computers with the help of software have made human life easy due to its ability of doing multitasking, computing and the quick search feature. Digital transformation helped in bringing vast changes in all the areas including hospitality, transport, manufacturing, automobile production industries and many more. Moreover, recent development in the artificial intelligence and machine learning have given mammoth scope in the automation which mundane task with robotics.
On the other hand, there are negligible detrimental effects of computer usage. In many cases, it has led to the issues of unemployment. Furthermore, people became lazy and sedentary. For example, sitting long hours on computer system causes severe physical and psychological problems and epidemics.
To recapitulate, among the inventions for the past 100 years, the computer has paramount role when compared to the inventions in the fields of antibiotics, airplane and many more which are highly dependent on computing and calculations. Thus, the foregoing discussion propound the view that computers outweigh the advantages of other sectors.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'imagine'.
Suggestion: hardly imagine
...cieties and economic activities. We can imagine hardly without computers. Computers with the h...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...icial intelligence and machine learning have given mammoth scope in the automation w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in many cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07024793388 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64481783955 2.71678728327 134% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652892561983 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8547016414 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179892158701 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045632418553 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730628603927 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107946315845 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796274151053 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.63 11.5310837438 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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