The past 100 years witnessed numerous important inventions, such as computers. What do you think is the most important invention among them? Please explain.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in a number of advanced inventions throughout the last century. There is a widespread worry that all of them are equally important and can gain a lot of advantages. In my opinion, the computer can consider as the most noticeable invention and this essay will explain it.
there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that computer can fulfill a wide range of human's needs all over the world. Not only, do it help to technological tasks, but it also contributes to medicine, transport, science, education, and what not. Needless to say, these merits stand current humans in good stead as far as in enhancing their lifestyle is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this discussion is every essential task in these days are based on the computer and related inventions. Thanks for the creation of computer. Furthermore, people must familiar with this innovation item because all functions today are running and depends on the computer. It is apparent why many are agree on the topic.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of this technological invention such as the computer is indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94366197183 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80411023864 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6067692586 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124174822004 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378323281805 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391361672744 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693403186722 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518628646066 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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