"People don't react to climate change because it is too distant. To make change we need to focus on the immediate: pollution and air quality."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
Climate change has become a global and most burning issue recently. Most people think that it is too far and thus don't take any major steps to fight with it while others believe that to tackle with this, we need to focus on pollution and air quality. This essay will discuss the reasons why it is necessary to control the pollution and air quality to fight with climate change.
To start with, climate change is the consequence of air pollution. It is lucid to say that changes in air quality gradually make our environment to change in an adverse way. For instance, pollutants and harmful gases in air makes the air more lethal and also increases the overall temperature of the environment. Hence, these consequences leads to bring adverse changes in our climate and that's why it becomes crucial to monitor the air quality of our surroundings.
Further to this, the emissions of greenhouse gases in atmospheric air also cause to bring changes in our environment. Clearly, how greenhouse gas is harmful for human being as well as for our environment is well known which leads to global warming. And global warming is only climate change which means we need to look after our air quality as well as should make less use of chemicals and other things which lead to climate change.
This essay has discussed how monitoring the air quality and pollution level of our environment may bring the healthier changes in our environment. In my opinion, to make changes in our climate we should monitor the pollution level in our environmental air.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eople think that it is too far and thus dont take any major steps to fight with it w...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an adverse way" with adverb for "adverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...radually make our environment to change in an adverse way. For instance, pollutants and harmful g...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ring adverse changes in our climate and thats why it becomes crucial to monitor the a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...the air quality of our surroundings. Further to this, the emissions of greenhouse ga...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bringing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: bringing
...use gases in atmospheric air also cause to bring changes in our environment. Clearly, ho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lution level in our environmental air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, may, so, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84905660377 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6164689137 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8976167578 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284328407966 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132267280356 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054402150447 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196440241049 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426197284568 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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