Problem and benefits for high school students study plays and work of theatres written centuries ago. Discuss and use your own experience.
These days, the idea of doing theater on ancient or traditional values is becoming popular among the students, however, there are people who don't agree with the statement that students should act in theaters to demonstrate old traditional values. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will lead to conclusion.
There are students who are interested in understanding the history of ancient people, so they act in the plays to demonstrate the ideas. In addition to this, these plays instill the knowledge of life that was lived by ancient people. For instance, Indus valley civilization is one the oldest civilization and students perform act to showcase the idea of life which is being lived by the people during that time.
On the other hand, there are people who think that these plays donot fit in modern or real life as they are old fashion. So there are some students who donot prefer to work in these plays which are on ancient values or traditions.
In this essay, I discussed both pros and cons of theater act being performed by students. I believe that everyone should understand the importance of life which is being lived by earlier people and the best way to make people understand is performing the act by students during study play.
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These days, the idea of doing
These days, the idea of doing theater on ancient or traditional values is becoming popular among the students, however, there are people who do not agree with the statement that students should act in theaters to demonstrate old traditional values. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will lead to conclusion.
There are students who are interested in understanding the history of ancient people, so they act in the plays to demonstrate the ideas. In addition to this, these plays instill the knowledge of life that was lived by ancient people. For instance, Indus valley civilization is one the oldest civilization and students perform act to showcase the idea of life which is being lived by the people during that time.
On the other hand, there are people who think that these plays do not fit in modern or real life as they are old fashion. So there are some students who do not prefer to work in these plays which are on ancient values or traditions.
In this essay, I discussed both pros and cons of theater act being performed by students. I believe that everyone should understand the importance of life which is being lived by earlier people and the best way to make people understand is performing the act by students during study play.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...students, however, there are people who dont agree with the statement that students ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88940092166 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53443652809 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493087557604 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4498726742 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109837004894 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526602457782 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264393368504 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717713992401 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197628232917 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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