With the rise in use of internet facilities results in generation of reveals problems in our society. Discuss the problems and its solution.
Surely, there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals the usage of internet has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain. Regarding this, I would demonstrate, it is happening mainly due to myriad obstacles such as, health and crime and it can be solved by implanting the solution discussed in easy.
To begin with, by surfing on internet there are ample health ailments which users have to face. To cite an example, the major health trouble is weakness of eyesight as well as back pain. Moreover, cyber crime is also the major issue in which, masses suffer problems like, lost their data and hacking as well.
In solution, user should not sit on one place for long time because it creates lot of problems for them with which they stay away from their work. Moving further, authority should ban some of social sites which have negative impact on individual’s life so due to this, people have to involve in illegal work. They should have cyber security as well.
To recapitulate, it can be clear from above discussions it that, if government will take some restriction steps regarding illegal work then people will not face any kind of trouble by using internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... any kind of trouble by using internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87336244541 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58904463341 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0673861923 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119389871171 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394385696981 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040266608653 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674466530382 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119201930573 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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