Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Transportation is the necessity of modern day life. People use cars, motorcycles and other vehicles to fulfill their daily transport needs. These days, whether to use private cars or not, is being question of debate. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the arguments.
People having their personal cars find an ease to move anywhere when needed. Private cars are being used for transportation as it is the easiest possible way. For example, according to a survey done in the early 20th century in the USA revealed that more than 70% of people secure their time by traveling in their own vehicles. Hence, having one's own car available at home can provide an effective way to save time in today's busy and hectic life.
On the other hand, pollution caused by a large number of cars is becoming the major reason for global warming. The discharge of various harmful gases; such as carbon dioxide, from an increasing number of cars is polluting our environment badly. For instance, a study done by the University of Texas showed that the ozone layer is being damaged continuously due to the release of such harmful gases by increased road traffic. Therefore, making a trend of using other means of transport could be beneficial to save a natural healthy environment.
In a nutshell, the essay discussed possible positive aspects of using personal vehicles as well as its deleterious effect on our society. Meanwhile, the benefits of using other means of transport are also being discussed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of transport are also being discussed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66017157901 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6565962641 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213172554434 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795389206206 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648968818671 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131926628955 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312597500524 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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