Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
Modern man has raised from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed with vast improvements in the standards of living. This topic about should the government avoid the people from using private cars and advice them to use of other means of transport like bicycles, skates buses etc. I am agree with this statement and discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, if people use bicycles or public transport, then they can save their money, which can use for other purposes like study or business. Moreover, petrol, diesel and other fuels are are very important for people, which gifted by God, Whereas these are going to be extent, so it can be saved by using of public transport or bicycles. Furthermore, when people travel in the buses or trains, they get chance to meet other persons, which increase their knowledge and improve their communication skills, Because knowledge is like sea which cannot be demolished.
Apart from this, Pollution have reached at the peak point, which is harmful for health,because pollution is very dangerous for people who have breathing and skin problems problems, so we can reduce the pollution by avoiding own cars. Besides this, today there is lots of rush of transport on the roads, which become cause of accidents, therefore if people will use buses or trains for travelling the they can decrease the rush from the roads.
In conclusion, it can be said that public transport or bicycles are very beneficial for all people due to some reasons, so people should use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
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Suggestion: the; they
...will use buses or trains for travelling the they can decrease the rush from the roads. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90347490347 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54024713425 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5687575837 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.111111111 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207260721042 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100887924964 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11459216297 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138193775956 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081305978476 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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