Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this?
Most of the people expect that constructing an unimpressed home must be banned because they are addressed to the common people. According to me, I am totally disagree with this concept.
Firstly, some type of people thinks that faded homes are backwarded for the country's tourism and looks very unimpressive scenes in the city. They totally concentrated on the beautiful and luxurious about the country's faith. They loves the splendid job of the common people and expecting to makes the environment in the tremendous things.
Secondly, another group of people, they are focussed only on the financial status of the middle and poor people. Actually, the decoration of the houses mostly depends upon the wealth of the individuals. Unless, they are lacked of money, they would not build the most beautiful and attracted houses in the city. The shelters are mainly for the people to save from sunlight, rainfall and natural calamities.
In the conclusion, the construction of building their own houses are fully depend upon the people's right. No one could interfer in others rights. If they prohibited these types of issue makes the people frustrated in all aspects and picked their freedom as well. So it should not be forced someone to build their own houses in other propectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hey are addressed to the common people. According to me, I am totally disagree with this concep...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...n people. According to me, I am totally disagree with this concept. Firstly, some typ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'love'
Suggestion: love
...uxurious about the countrys faith. They loves the splendid job of the common people a...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...b of the common people and expecting to makes the environment in the tremendous thing...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... of building their own houses are fully depend upon the peoples right. No one could in...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10426540284 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6300542102 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6626969432 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266700509625 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830278174346 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494929399518 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146333200404 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244728858817 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.