Some people believe that laws change human behavior. do you agree with it ?
The idea that many people think that laws changes human behavior is widely debated. Some people agree with that laws do change human behavior however, others do not agree with it. I strongly agree with the statement it does change in the human behavior with so many reasons and I will explain in this essay.
there are numerous reasons in which laws changes human behavior. First and foremost are those laws prevent people from crimes. government makes laws for everyone if people do not follow laws in their country they get penalized and also fined by the police. there will be increase rate in crime for example; while driving one should follow the rule to stop on the red light and people do follow that rule they know that if they do not follow this rule they will be caught by the traffic police.
Another reason is that these days people are well educated and they are well aware of all the rules and the laws made by the government for example; these days it is clearly written on the roads that people should not through garbage on the road and people do follow these rules and try to maintain the cleanliness in the country.
To conclude, undoubtedly laws changes human behavior. government is doing their best to maintain the laws in order to reshaping the country in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12397558308 2.71678728327 78% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471861471861 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9464114778 50.4703680194 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479643099439 0.242375264174 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247783063023 0.0925447433944 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173200184109 0.071462118173 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307810939722 0.151781067708 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191440220335 0.0609392437508 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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