Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Each and every individual's dream is to have a family. On the other hand, some people tend to settle down in rural areas, whereas, others tend to prefer the urban cities for their convenience. In my opinion, settling down in an urban city is much more practical than in a rural area.
Firstly, living in a big city has its own pros and cons. Furthermore, in a big city you can enjoy the benefits of grocery stores, personal equipment and other stuff. For example, if a family wants to shop can always go the mall or stores, whereas, in a rural area you are not able to avail this facility because of the travel distance. As a result, the pros of living in an urban city are more than living in a rural city.
Secondly, in rural areas, there is a lot of concern about the personal hygiene and sanitation. The governments are also concerned about the development of a big city. Apparently, there are certain NGOs who have taken up an initiative to develop the rural areas but the implementation of the plan is still incomplete. Moreover, these areas do not have a proper supply of electricity and water, making it almost impossible to live.
The rising population are either settling down in a rural area or for their convenience in an urban city. To conclude, due to lack of proper facilities and hygiene in a rural area, people are feeling more convenient in settling down in a big city and start a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60598784071 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2246442642 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.25397266985 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293720360724 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960680021004 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785601722354 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180558167468 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819358375259 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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