Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
people thinks that doing exercise is a way to keep health fit but some others people feel that having a balanced diet is more important. We will discuss about both views in below paragraph.
In other hand, I believe that exercising is he best way to stay fit, when a person exercise daily basis, he does not have to kill his wish. he can consume anything which he want and can then exercise to burn the extra calories. While doing exercise person do different activates without drowsiness and the blood flow will increases
Furthermore, diet is never the best way to stay fit because the food available these days are stuffed with chemicals. Hence, consuming the balanced diet is just like stuffing chemicals in our body, which can never help in staying fit
In conclusion, exercising is a way better and longer lasting solution to lead a healthy lifestyle. people should exercise at least five times a week to stay away from infection and illnesses,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people thinks that doing exercise is a way to ...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... vital roles to keep up our health fit. but diet is the most important to make our ...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun exercise seems to be countable; consider using: 'many exercises'.
Suggestion: many exercises
... he had over weight. After that he took many exercise to control their fitness but he can&apo...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'he the best'.
Suggestion: he the best
...ther hand, I believe that exercising is he best way to stay fit, when a person exercise...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...sis, he does not have to kill his wish. he can consume anything which he want and ...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... wish. he can consume anything which he want and can then exercise to burn the extra...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...hout drowsiness and the blood flow will increases Furthermore, diet is never the best ...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...g solution to lead a healthy lifestyle. people should exercise at least five times a w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60465116279 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42086457725 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4050060814 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254648452324 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10083790979 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121886507015 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165162931363 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161829800409 0.0609392437508 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.