Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles. Others feel that it is important to give one’s mind a rest in leisure time. Discuss.
In this modern world, everyone is completely occupied with their commitments without taking any rest. While some people believe that leisure time should be utilized to develop their mind by reading and solving puzzles, others maintain that mind needs complete rest during free time.
In this essay, will discuss on both sides of arguments and followed by a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, it is very important for an individual to spend their free time in various useful ways. Firstly, it is good to spend on some activities which promote their brain to a next level. Play Chess game, for example, helps the brain to improve on logical thinking and problem-solving skills.
Secondly, people who travel by train or bus can utilize their journey time in reading publications related to the latest development could broaden their knowledge. Finally, consider involving in a healthy discussion with their friends or families regarding any social issues can enlarge their social and communicating skills.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, each and every person's mind needs enough rest to overcome stress and anxiety in their life. It gives relief and peacefulness to strengthen their soul. Furthermore, no one knows how many young adults are suffering from memory loss and brain nerves related problems. According to Times Magazine January 2013 edition, a large proportion of young American affected by stress has increased by 30 percent between 2010 and 2012, which was also predicted to increase significantly. So, in order to overcome this prediction, people should give enough rest to their mind to clean up all emotions and anger.
In conclusion, from my point of view, the mind needs some rest during leisure time to improve your health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1958041958 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61812242178 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2660340316 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312865899024 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974130574761 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987767837019 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150739047859 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877343189031 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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