In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, Mass shooting is A common incident across the globe by using licensed guns from home. While some people believe that guns are really important for the safety of their family, others think that deadly weapons are not meant to keep in the home. This essay agrees with this statement and believes that issuing guns to each individual is the leading cause of this incident.

To begin with, critics may point out that weapons were needed by families isolated from cities and for those living in forest area to protect themselves from wild animals. In addition, people who are receiving threats from multiple sources are responsible to keep guns in their homes to protect them from disturbance. For example, political leaders and high-level military authorities are keeping personal rifles and safety guard to overcome threats. So guns should be issued to authorized people with proper coaching and counseling.

On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, keeping guns and other deadly weapons in the home leads to various negative consequences. Firstly, children are getting easy access to those weapons and also encouraged by their parents who are completely unaware of its consequences. Secondly, current generation young adults are unable to handle depressions and failures caused by surrounding environment because of which their mind is forced to take revenge by shooting at innocent students and neighbors. According to Times Magazine January 2013 edition, a survey report showed that in the United States of America majority of gun violence around 30 percent are committed by middle age groups. Lastly, a stringent law should be passed by the government to control accidents caused by weapons.

In conclusion, keeping guns in the home is the major cause of shooting massacres which government should play an important role in controlling it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2861952862 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6317520115 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0703792502 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.25397266985 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128641054559 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467277472331 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370800852651 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835960862671 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301969126404 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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