Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over this matter whether music is as important as other subjects. This has elicited a stimulated disputation among the public. Whereas some people say that music should be kept separate and should not be promoted, I sanguinely believe that music is an important subject and can be helpful in learning other subjects. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that music help students in relaxing their mind. Which help students in learning other subjects. Another cogent reason is that as music is an art it help students in building their artistic skills and creativity.
On the contrary, there are some skeptics who conjecture that music would distract the children as they would focus on the music only and would ignore other important subjects which require their more attention. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not true, as this can be controlled by a strict timetable for each subject.
After analyzing the above facts I would like to recapitulate that as music helps students develop their creative and artistic skill, hence Music is an important subject as the other subject and should be promoted.
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- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical but give more practical training throughout their courses 77
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...c help students in relaxing their mind. Which help students in learning other subject...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nt reason is that as music is an art it help students in building their artistic ski...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, then, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07079646018 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53988467749 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8579985052 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186212064327 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773077505734 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585464829702 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117079939268 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277996769184 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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