Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
The effects of the music as the subject in mainstream education which was always debatable, has now become controversial.The substantial influence of teaching music theory and practical to preschool level kids has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on teaching the traditional subjects like mathematics and science in recent years. it can be agreed that music has a great impact but it has some drawbacks. this essay will elaborates how music is important as other subjects and how the permission to be creative is essential for students engagement, and thus it will lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why music should be taught at all the levels of education system, but most conspicuous one stem from the fact that music sharpens the students minds and helps to become more creative, disciplined and acts as the medium for expression.As a tangible example, studies by Monash university revels that the group of student who were taught music had a very active brain and had a higher overall grades than the students who were only taught formal subjects as music also act as the yoga to disciplined the brain.Moreover, the music also helped the students to enjoy their freedom of expression and enhanced their creativity and hidden talents.Musical expression and creativity, thus, play a vital role in building the confidence of young people.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that music is the hobby and it should not be the academic subjects as music distracts the students from their homework and other important assessments.For instance, the research work published by university of Tasmania showed that the students who undertake the music fails to submit their homework within the due date as these students were also found to develop less interest on other formal subjects.music as the mainstream subject ,hence, is not always worth.
Summarising the content I reiterate my opinion that the positive effect of music in all educational level is prominent, however, it has some drawbacks that should not be overlooked.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1207.87684729 151% => OK
No of words: 344.0 242.827586207 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31395348837 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93610983123 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.5024630542 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 242.243449631 50.4703680194 480% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.666666667 104.977214359 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.3333333333 20.9669160288 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.25397266985 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219022838911 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122305740479 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01739881081 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138885577213 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351766689019 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 12.6369458128 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 53.1260098522 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.9458128079 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.3980295567 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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