'Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.' To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Few individuals claim that there are several kinds of work that are more appropriate specifically for men and women. In my opinion, I partially agree to the foregoing statement because of physical work mostly intended for men and I also tend to disagree at some point due to equal oppoerunities for all. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the working force at the present time allows ladies and gentlemen to have their own specialization when it comes to obtaining position in certain companies. The majority of construction firms are hiring groups of men to fill in various job orders and accomplished the building of structure. For example, skilled works such as masonry and carpentry requires the physical ability of men than that of women. Hence, there are particular job functions that are best suited for males which would not work for females.
On the other hand, equality among genders has been already established since the past few decades. All types of sexes can now fairly do the job effectively compared before. To illustrate, numerous culinary businesses are providing equal work opportunities for men and women in many aspect of the organization . As a result, both genders seem to accomplish their task properly and without a problem to the employer.
To recapitulate, acquiring respectable positions in companies for all gender types is not a matter of discrimination nowadays. Perhaps, people accept their capability on specific work and openly share it with their counterparts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...work opportunities for men and women in many aspect of the organization . As a result, both...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...women in many aspect of the organization . As a result, both genders seem to accom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23293172691 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97474435876 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654618473896 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8179486178 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238204856146 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804020615434 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576681525036 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137016715831 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560886089136 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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