In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to say that, not only the developed countries but also developing countries are building very large shopping plazas in their cities and arban areas. Some people believe that big shopping plazzas are better, while others opine that small local shops should be there in the cities instead of high rise buildings and plazas. I am inclined towards building shopping malls in the cities.
Firstly, shopping plazas are more convenient and easy for the people living in the cities and towns because, all different brands and categories, to shop, you can find at a single place. In addition multi story plaza can adjust more number of shops at a single place. For example, In Dubai, if you will enter into a shopping center you can buy each and every thing of your choice at a single place. large shopping plazas can be a better replacement of small local shops.
Furthermore, local shops are totally owned by the individuals and their location can be scattered from one place to another. In contrast to local shops, shopping malls not only occupy space but can adjust large number of similar local shops. The plaza is more easy place to shop where you can shop from grocery, electronics, clothes and other household items. while local shops will not provide you such a facility to shop everything at a sinle place.
To recapitulate the foregoing discussion, shopping malls and local shops are two differnt ways to arrange the shoping experience and both have their own pros and cons. In my opinion, shopping mall is a good way to replace the markets and local centers in cities and towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84363636364 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40362261033 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3990358216 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432596852736 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18662544856 0.0925447433944 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668756680236 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278078220946 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017775532801 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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