travel to study is overrated. we have brillent scholars, who study locally. Is traveling really required for higher studies.
Education is key of personal development through which masses can make their career better. Some think that travel for higher study is overrated, but other ponder that it is beneficial for person. I deem that travelling is good for learner and it is not an exaggerated thinking. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
There are numerous reasons, why I ponder that travel to other countries is best way get more opportunities and external exposure. For instance, when students move to foreign country for higher education in recognized universities then they get more chances in future to work in reputated companies and institutions. The study of those universities is well accepted over all world. Furthermore, they also learn about different cultures, which support them to adapt into new environment easily.
The another relevant point is that pupil can become independent as foreigner countries allows the students to work along with study to fulfill their needs and they can easily tackle with any circumstances. For example, in Australia and other countries particular working hours are provided to each candidate. Lastly, they gain more practical skills, as foreign nations focus more on practical knowledge of students than theoretical one.
To conclude, one can say that travel to a plethora of regions bring new changes in life, as this idea make person economically, socially as well as intellectually strong and stable. I can call it path of success and stability in future.
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| 2018-05-31 | manjit singh | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...I ponder that travel to other countries is best way get more opportunities and external...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n call it path of success and stability in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28333333333 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89816752449 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5678930641 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175130219872 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639513592897 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881699176709 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107456011685 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760576613362 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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