universities should be concerned with education people so that have wide general knowledge and be able to consider important matter to form a considered view point and not simply than students to do jobs required by society.
There are number of alarming issues in present scenario but students are only taught about their study and job requirement and basic information is not given to them. So, it needs to provide imperative information and knowledge to them. I am going to explain my views in subsequent paragraphs.
Highlighting my views, I deem that there is need to aware the people about the environmental issues like protection of nature through lecture and health talks because it is prime responsibility of individuals to save it. Further, corruption is on peak point so I think that universities should teach about protection of country from such issues for example people should pay tax to local bodies so that changes can be noticed in nation.
The another conducive idea striking in my mind is there is more need divert the mind of people toward social evils like materialistic, violence and child abuse etcetera. These problems can be overcome by taking strong steps for instance development of positive thinking related to poorer once. Above all this, another relevant point of discussion should be regarding moral values like respect of elder one, religion and culture through providing a well guidance like importance of family, society as well as relation.
Summarize the whole content, I reiterate my opinion that if universities will take all these necessary steps in class rooms as well as in extracurricular activities just like functions then I presume that I is not a far that people will see a good nation into a eye individual eyes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07874015748 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8559566371 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2976719444 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159801366735 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610132049331 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438785020974 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869546016664 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352678039883 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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