“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a
group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and
examples
Over the history, a set of ideas exercised by the group of people or organization have been impacting the lives of thousands of civilians. At the economic or the social level, what a group decides is being implemented into the society without taking into consideration the opinion of a normal citizen. This essay will completely agree with this statement and will offer reasons to support the viewpoints.
Due to the interest of the different group of countries or the group of parties within the same country, an act or law is created and which is then imposed.We have many examples in front of us like the World War-II and the United States, September-11 attacks. During the World War-II, a group of countries namely the US, the UK and China united and bombarded Japan with highly radio-active atomic bombs, although these countries succeeded in their objective but they devastated the lives of more than 1 lakh civilians, the aftereffects of these radio-active radiations are still witnessed today like in the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, there are babies born with sight and hearing deficiency.
On September-11, a group of 19 militants who belonged to the Islamic extremist party, hijacked four air-crafts and collided them with the US symbolic landmark taking away the lives of 3000 people. Obviously, these type of exercises have a zero interest in the local public and should be condemned at any cost.
In the conclusion, it is hoped that in the future an authority or organization like the government will take into consideration the moral values of the normal citizen and think about its consequences first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...aw is created and which is then imposed.We have many examples in front of us like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06691449814 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85059582307 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.439637223 50.4703680194 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.375 104.977214359 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 20.9669160288 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665377449544 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279476198983 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214024862633 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352420672435 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242436354773 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 12.6369458128 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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