What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which ne things are constantly being invented?
In the modern world there are a lot of new inventions are available which becomes mankind life so easier. But in some cases it gives a lot of impacts which are not good for environment. So, this essay will highlights the advantages and disadvantages in my upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons behind this statement but first and foremost is that in some ways technology gives a lot of benefits which helps the human to move easily one to another place with short of time. Moreover, technology also helps in particular ways such as mobile phones. In my home there are two handsets which is easy to carry and in which a lot of functions are available which replace the some electronic equipments such as camera, calculator and so on.
On the other hand, some new inventions gives a lot of benefits but they have also some demerits. In some cases new things are replacing old tools. Moreover, increasing with new inventions also increase pollution which badly affected the environment and human beings suffered with various type of health issues. For instance, skin problems, asthma, lung cancer and so on.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the disadvantages overweight the advantages and government should aware the people uses of new inventions only in particular scenario otherwise it should be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in particular, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97379912664 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72233532614 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545851528384 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.404042039 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.545454545 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168531329369 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631203995682 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415526399831 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109152528803 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273016643943 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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