what are advantages and disadvantages of living in era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Modern man is raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. So I will discuss merits and demerits of living in era where new things are continuously discovered in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, technology has changed the world drastically, today man can do many works easily because of technology, due to which he can save his time and money, which he spend on the labour. Moreover, science provide many things to the human, that makes human life luxurious. Furthermore, people can communicate from long distance with help of technology.
On the other side, but some people think many machines replace the workers due to which employment rate has decreased and unempolyed person can choose the astray, therefore crime rate is also increased in the society. Besides this, machines are not believable as human and if the machine have any problem then it proves very dangerous for human beings.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. but my my opinion is machines are very helpful for the human, but people should use some precautions while they work in on the machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97549019608 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6472176786 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68137254902 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0386311217 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.25397266985 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102057062605 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405871238079 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583299348217 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594220498675 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593144330683 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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