What Is The Best Invention Of Last 100 Years, Computer, Antibiotics, Airplane.
The discussion on whether computer; antibiotics or airplane is the best invention in the century is debatable and each side has their own reasonable arguments. I believe computer is the most wonderful invention up until these days compared to antibiotic and airplane.
To begin with, in spite of various arguments, computer has changed many aspect of human life in working environment to individual lifestyle. For clerical work wise, computer has enhanced the work efficiency of worker in many ways. Employees cannot sit in the office and make communication with other business partner overseas and they can accomplish their project easily compare to the past. According to a study shows that, many people are using computer to browsing Internet to acquire many new knowledge.
In addition to that, computer gives people the easy way to store digital document. Many company have implemented their policy to reduce the usage of paper, which it will help to greenhouse gas and help to reduce the depletion of environment. This instance, many trees have been saved from logging and cutting down for printing paper. Computer digitalized many documents that people use and save our mother nature.
Lastly, in my opinion, computer has improved the way people way, and it helps people to push their limit for new creativity in many realm of sciences.
In conclusion, computer is the best invention in this last 100 years because it improves quality of work and preserves our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...various arguments, computer has changed many aspect of human life in working environment to...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new knowledge', 'a good deal of new knowledge'.
Suggestion: much new knowledge; a good deal of new knowledge
...omputer to browsing Internet to acquire many new knowledge. In addition to that, computer gives...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many companies'.
Suggestion: Many companies
...the easy way to store digital document. Many company have implemented their policy to reduce...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun realm seems to be countable; consider using: 'many realms'.
Suggestion: many realms
... push their limit for new creativity in many realm of sciences. In conclusion, computer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70439136201 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4944211656 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951718439133 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391767217314 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711260593777 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787325439703 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968843738665 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.